You recently spent the night at an expensive hotel. There was a problem with your room, but the hotel staff was unable to do anything about it. Write a letter to the hotel manager. In your letter • describe the problem. • explain what happened when you asked the hotel staff for help. • say what you would like the manager to do.

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Dear Sir or Madam, I thought you should know about the problem that I experienced
last
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week during my stay at your
hotel
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Television
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The television
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in my suite was not working. I asked for help
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from
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the
hotel
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staff, but they were not able to turn it on. I hope we can agree on a way to solve the problem. The problem was about
television
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. When I tried to turn the
television
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on at night, it was not working. I like to watch a T.V. series, which comes at night every Sunday. Since I stayed at the
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on
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last
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Sunday, I missed the whole episode. When I tried to seek help from the staff members, they could not do anything. They said that the electrician has a day off, and they do not have any idea how to repair the
television
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.
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they tried to unplug and plug wires, they were not successful in turning the
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on. In my opinion, you should hire two electricians. When one electrician has a day off, another one can address
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issues.
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, guests would not face
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that I faced
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Sunday. Since the
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charges a lot to the guests, we expect the best services from the
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. I hope you are willing to accept my solution. Sincerely, Mansi Patel

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • malfunctioning
  • inconvenience
  • rectify
  • compensate
  • dismissive
  • unresponsive
  • escalate
  • assure
  • inadequate
  • suffered
  • resolve
  • address the issue
  • accommodation
  • gestures of goodwill
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