The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.

The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.
The pie charts display the proportion of consuming
water
for industrial, agricultural, and domestic purposes in six different
countries
.
Overall
, it is clear from the charts that
water
is mostly used for agricultural purposes in African and Asian
countries
,
while
North American and European
countries
used more
water
for their industrial needs.
To begin
with, in Africa, South
America
, Central, and Southeast Asia more than 70% of
water
utilizes
to
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the agricultural sector,
whereas
in North
America
and
Europe
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,Europe
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this
sector is 39% and 32% respectively.
On the contrary
, these areas used more
water
for industrial purposes, 48% and 53% respectively,
while
in other
countries
industrial consumption of
water
requires about 10%
average
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. The major portion of
water
consumption for domestic needs could be observed in South
America
(19%) and North
America
(13%),
while
European, African,
Asian
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and Asian
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regions showed the minimum proportion of using
the
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household
water
.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • consumption
  • irrigation
  • domestic
  • industrial
  • regional disparity
  • economic structure
  • sustainable management
  • water-scarce
  • population density
  • urbanization
  • data trends
  • resource allocation
  • percentage distribution
  • extremes
  • variations
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