The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.

The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.
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The pie charts display the proportion of consuming
water
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for industrial, agricultural, and domestic purposes in six different
countries
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.
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, it is clear from the charts that
water
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is mostly used for agricultural purposes in African and Asian
countries
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,
while
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North American and European
countries
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used more
water
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for their industrial needs.
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with, in Africa, South
America
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, Central, and Southeast Asia more than 70% of
water
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utilizes
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the agricultural sector,
whereas
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in North
America
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and
Europe
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,Europe
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this
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sector is 39% and 32% respectively.
On the contrary
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, these areas used more
water
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for industrial purposes, 48% and 53% respectively,
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in other
countries
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industrial consumption of
water
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requires about 10%
average
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. The major portion of
water
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consumption for domestic needs could be observed in South
America
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(19%) and North
America
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(13%),
while
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European, African,
Asian
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and Asian
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regions showed the minimum proportion of using
the
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apply
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household
water
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.

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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words water, countries, america with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • consumption
  • irrigation
  • domestic
  • industrial
  • regional disparity
  • economic structure
  • sustainable management
  • water-scarce
  • population density
  • urbanization
  • data trends
  • resource allocation
  • percentage distribution
  • extremes
  • variations
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