The chart below shows information about changes in average house prices in five different cities between 1990 and 2002 compared with the average house price in 1989. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
There are 5 different cities between 1990-2002.
During 1990-1995 in New York, USA,
-5
average percentage change from 1989 Correct article usage
the -5
prices
, which is a 5 average percent
adjustment in 1996-2002. During 1990-1995 in Madrid, Spain, it isChange the spelling
per cent
2
average percentage change from 1989 Correct article usage
a 2
prices
while
during 1996-2002, it is a 4 average percent
adjustment. During 1990-1995 in Tokyo, Japan, it is Change the spelling
per cent
-8
average percentage change from 1989 Correct article usage
a -8
prices
while
during 1996-2002 is -5
average Correct article usage
a -5
percent
adjustment.
During 1990-1995 in Frankfurt, Germany, it is 3 average rate development from 1989 Change the spelling
per cent
prices
while
1 average proportion difference during 1996-2002. Lastly
, during 1990-1995 in London, UK, it is -8
average proportion difference from 1989 Correct article usage
an -8
prices
while
during 1996-2002 it increases to 12 average proportion difference.
Therefore
, I conclude that London has the
biggest development in average house Add a missing verb
had the
prices
since 1989 between 1990-1995 and 1996-2002.Submitted by elahuang1 on
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