The pie chart below shows the main reasons why agricultural land becomes less productive. The table shows these causes affected three regions of the world during the 1990s. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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, the world is greatly affected by 35% of over-grazing, 30% of deforestation, 28% of over-cultivation and 7% of other causes. There are three regions that are severely affected, North

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. In North

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, erosion is 0.2%, over-horticulture is 3.3%,

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is 1.5%, which is 5% total of land degraded. In

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, erosion is 9.8%, over-grazing 5.5%,

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is 7.7%, which is 23% total of land degraded.

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, erosion is 1.7%, 0% of over-horticulture,

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of 11.3%, which is 13% total of land degraded. In conclusion, the highest affected deforestation is in

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. The highest affected region in over-cultivation is in

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Oceania

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