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the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world

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The pie charts illustrate the
water
 utilization for three main purposes in six regions of the world. Overall, a considerable amount of
water
 is used for industrial purpose and agricultural purpose, while the least amount of
water
 is consumed for domestic
use
. As can be seen from the pie graphs, the
water
 consumption in both North America and Europe share a similar composition. To be more specific, in both continents, about a half amount of the
water
 is required in industrial sectors, nearly one-
third
 is spent on cultivating crops, and only 13% to 15% for people’s family
use
.
However
, as for
other
any of various alternatives; some other
another
 four areas,
agricultural division
Suggestion
the agricultural division
 takes over the industrial
division becoming
Suggestion
division, becoming
 the largest
water
 consumer. Precisely, about nine-tenths of the total consumption goes to the agricultural sector in Central Asia, which is almost triple than that of Europe.
Water
 usage for
this
 purpose is
reduces
Suggestion
reduced
 gradually in Africa (84%), South East (81%) and South America (71%), whereas the industrial
use
 only makes up very insignificant proportions from 7% to 12%.
In addition
, household
water
use
 always constitutes the
least
immediately past
last
 portion in each region, with the highest rate of 19% in South America and the lowest percentage of 7% in both Central Asia and South East Asia.

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