the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world

✨ Do you want to improve your IELTS writing?
The pie charts show
water
Use synonyms
use
Use synonyms
in six regions of the world, divided into three categories – industrial, agricultural, and domestic
use
Use synonyms
. In North America and Europe, which can be said to comprise the developed world, the patterns of
water
Use synonyms
use
Use synonyms
are very similar, whereas in the undeveloped regions there are a variety of
water
Use synonyms
distribution patterns. In North America and Europe, the primary
use
Use synonyms
for
Suggestion
of
water
Use synonyms
is in
industry
Suggestion
the industry
, with industrial
use
Use synonyms
comprising about half of these regions’
water
Use synonyms
consumption
Suggestion
consumed
.
This
Linking Words
is followed by agricultural
use
Use synonyms
, which makes up very roughly one-
third
Linking Words
of the
water
Use synonyms
.
In contrast
Linking Words
, domestic
use
Use synonyms
of
water
Use synonyms
is a relatively small part of the entire
water
Use synonyms
consumption of these regions at just 13% and 15%, respectively. In the other four regions, agricultural
use
Use synonyms
of
water
Use synonyms
is dominant, making up roughly 80% of the total
water
Use synonyms
used.
In contrast
Linking Words
, no more than 12% of
water
Use synonyms
is used for industrial purposes in these four regions, and only South America has more than 10% of its
Use synonyms
water marked
a line marking the level reached by a body of water
watermarked
for domestic
use
Use synonyms
.
Thus
Linking Words
, they stand in stark contrast to North America and Europe.
Submitted by 18739161977 on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Fully explain your ideas

To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).

For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

What to do next:
Look at other essays: