the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world

The pie charts show
water
use
in six regions of the world, divided into three categories – industrial, agricultural, and domestic
use
. In North America and Europe, which can be said to comprise the developed world, the patterns of
water
use
are very similar, whereas in the undeveloped regions there are a variety of
water
distribution patterns. In North America and Europe, the primary
use
for
Suggestion
of
water
is in
industry
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the industry
, with industrial
use
comprising about half of these regions’
water
consumption
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consumed
.
This
is followed by agricultural
use
, which makes up very roughly one-
third
of the
water
.
In contrast
, domestic
use
of
water
is a relatively small part of the entire
water
consumption of these regions at just 13% and 15%, respectively. In the other four regions, agricultural
use
of
water
is dominant, making up roughly 80% of the total
water
used.
In contrast
, no more than 12% of
water
is used for industrial purposes in these four regions, and only South America has more than 10% of its
water marked
a line marking the level reached by a body of water
watermarked
for domestic
use
.
Thus
, they stand in stark contrast to North America and Europe.
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