You arranged to visit a friend in Canada but an important event at home now means that you must change the dates of the visit. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter explain the important event apologise for the situation suggest a new arrangement

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Dear Raymond, I hope you are doing well. I am afraid that I need to reschedule my trip to Canada that has been planned

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week of May. You know that my grandmother was suffering from joint pain for a

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long period.

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, the pain is now unbearable so, after the doctor's consultation she has been suggested to undergo a knee replacement surgy in May. I need to be with my family at

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time. I apologized for the sudden change in plan, but I know you will understand the situation. Once the surgy has been completed and she gets recovered which might take around a month's time. We may continue with the plan which we have decided for May with a bit shift in the month from May to June. I hope you will understand the situation. Sincerely, Rose Marie

Fri Jan 31 2020

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Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 150 words in writing task 1. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long letter will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 160 to 190 words in writing task 1. This will ensure a concise letter and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 20 minutes to write the letter and you need around 5 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long letter in 15 minutes.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

143 words

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You arranged to visit a friend in Canada but an important event at home now means that you must change the dates of the visit. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter explain the important event apologise for the situation suggest a new arrangement

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An increasing number of professionals, such as doctors and teachers, are leaving their own poorer countries to work in developed countries. What problems does this cause? What can be done to deal with this situation?

You have arranged to visit a friend in England but an important event at home now means that you must change the dates of the visit. -Write a letter to your friend.

Some peopel think that exercise is the key to health while others feel that having a balanced diet is more important

Some people believe the purpose of education is to prepare people to be useful members of society. Others say that the purpose of education is to achieve personal ambitions. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.