You recently bought a piece of equipment for your kitchen but it did not work. You pho0ned the shop but no action was taken. Write a letter to the shop manager. In your letter ● describe the problem with the equipment ● explain what happened when you phoned the ● say what you would like the manager to do.

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with the recently purchased Food Processor from your store. The Processor is the latest model of the Magic Bullet which has an inbuilt feature of no noise while working.
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, on the
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the machine stopped working as the motor got heated. To get it checked I called your store wherein, one of the representatives asked me to follow some steps and fixed time with me
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so that an engineer from your company will visit my place. It has been
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few weeks
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, but no one ever visited to troubleshoot nor called me to rearrange the meeting. I am not satisfied with your teams' post-sales services and entitled to request you to take the processor back and provide me with my refund. I have made up my mind and would not prefer to receive any
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solutions and offers. I await your prompt service. Yours faithfully, John Brown

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • malfunctioning
  • defective
  • warranty
  • receipt
  • customer service
  • diagnose
  • troubleshooting
  • unsatisfactory
  • resolution
  • acknowledgement
  • immediate attention
  • inconvenience
  • appliance
  • follow-up
  • rectify
  • compensation
  • escalate
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