The charts below show local government expenditure in 2010 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
These two pie charts are illustrating information about the spending of
the
government on nine categories between the Correct article usage
apply
year
2010 till 2015.
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Overall
, it can be seen that education contributed to the largest segment of the chart in 2010, Linking Words
while
others considered Linking Words
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it to
to be
the lowest segment. In comparison with the final Change the verb form
being
year
, education remained the most significant sector, Use synonyms
while
transport, culture and leisure and others were the least popular expenditures.
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At
the beginning, welfare experienced a number of 8 Change the preposition
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percent
, Change the spelling
per cent
this
increased to 13 Linking Words
percent
in 2015. Interest and borrowing were 5 % in 2010, Change the spelling
per cent
this
rate doubled Linking Words
up
in the final Change preposition
apply
year
.
Education, which comprised Use synonyms
to
the largest segment was 24% in 2010. Change preposition
apply
This
slightly dropped down Linking Words
with
3% in 2015. In the first Change preposition
to
year
, healthcare was the Use synonyms
second
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popular
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most popular
expenses
with 21%. Fix the agreement mistake
expense
This
gently experienced a drop Linking Words
with
1%. In 2010, Defence was 17% of the total payments, which showed a downward trend to 14% in the final Change preposition
of
year
. Transport, Culture and Leisure made up 3% and 2% of the government expenditures and both declined to 1% in 2015. Use synonyms
In contrast
, Linking Words
Pension
and Others remained steady in both years at 19% and 1%.Fix the agreement mistake
Pensions
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