During a recent plane journey, you sat next to a businessman who owns a chain of restaurants. You talked to him and he suggested that you should contact him about a possible job in one of his restaurants. Write a letter to this businessman. In your letter • remind him when and where you met • tell him what kind of job you are interested in • say what you think you would be suitable for the job

Dear Sir, I am Arin
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and was sitting
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the plane while flying between London and Newyork. During our talk
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the journey, I was suggested to contact you regarding my placement in one of your restaurants. I have completed my Master in International
Crusine
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Cuisine
and
specilized
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specialized
specialised
in
Desserts
Department. I have 2 years experience. I am interested to work as
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in the same stream. I am capable in preparation of all international
desserts
to the best presentation and taste. I
also
am certified in creating mixed
cruisine
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cuisine
cruising
desserts
, meeting the satisfaction of the client. I have
also
received several appreciation certificates for my skills. I look forward
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this
job, as during our discussion you put forward the lack of perfection in the dessert section of your restaurant. I believe I will be able to fill in the gap and create your restaurant as a symbol for
Desserts
in the city. I will
also
be able to provide you with the reference letter and a copy of all my certificates
rececived
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received
from my previous employer, which I had to quit due to relocation. I will be able to represent my quality of work, given an
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opportunity
. Looking forward
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your reply.
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sincerely Arin
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • chain of restaurants
  • potential job opportunity
  • relevant experience
  • managerial role
  • customer service
  • qualifications
  • certifications
  • unique skills
  • eagerness
  • admiration
  • resume
  • references
  • face-to-face meeting
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