Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as the Sahara desert or the Antarctic? What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places?

Tourism is the most rapidly growing
sector
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sectors
globally. Nowadays, the tourists are more attracted towards few destinations where the
environmental
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environment
environments
and the geographic conditions are
worst
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worse
for the human-being.
this
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This
essay discusses about positive and
negetive
characterized by or displaying negation or denial or opposition or resistance; having no positive features
negative
sides of the above notion in the
folowing
about to be mentioned or specified
following
paragraph.
To begin
with, the tourists are very curious about to explore places with extreme conditions help them to measure their physical and mental health with full of thrill during their
tour
. As specially,
youth
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the youth
of
this
modern age
want
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wants
to collect more information about
such
exceedly
with excitement; in an excited manner
excitedly
spots where other people try to avoid.
This
experience
brings lifetime
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brings a lifetime
memory for tourists to live in most beautiful and unexplored place.
Moreover
, the atmospheres which are not is the favour of the tourists teach them basic survival techniques and they might apply
this
knowledge later in their life with emergency situations.
However
, the tourists who are not physically fit may have to suffer a lot due to lack of basic survival needs.
Secondly
, many people need to have
break
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a break
from their routine work and plan a
tour
with their kith and kins;
ususally
under normal conditions
usually
they are looking for
destination
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a destination
where they can rest and
enjot
derive or receive pleasure from; get enjoyment from; take pleasure in
enjoy
their
tour
. Whilst, the tourists are aware about
difficut
not easy; requiring great physical or mental effort to accomplish or comprehend or endure
difficult
conditions of the place they might have any accident during
tour
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the tour
a tour
and it might bring their life in danger.
For instance
, the story of
mountainer
a state in northwestern United States on the Canadian border
Montana
mountain
mountaineer
in the
Himaliyas
a mountain range extending 1500 miles on the border between India and Tibet; this range contains the world's highest mountain
Himalayas
desctribe
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describes
describe
described
on
indefinite article, "an" is use before a vowel sound, "a" otherwise
an
accident
in
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on
during
his trip ruined his personal life. To conclude, the tourists have to be more aware about
tour
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tourist
destinations and if they train themselves properly
then
conjunction used in comparatives
than
the risk of accident can be
curb
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curbed
.
Also
the administration should spread awareness to the citizens about
such
activities.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • breathtaking landscapes
  • unique ecosystems
  • sense of adventure
  • personal growth
  • indigenous cultures
  • environmental conservation
  • climate change
  • environmental degradation
  • economically disadvantaged areas
  • physical health
  • harsh weather
  • difficult terrain
  • limited access to medical facilities
  • fragile ecosystems
  • habitat destruction
  • basic amenities
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