The first car appeared on British roads in 1888. By the year 2000 there may be as many as 29 million vehicles on British roads. Alternative forms of transport should be encouraged and international laws introduced to control car ownership and use. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

From

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Since

the ancient ages to our days people want to move as fast as it possible. Horses, diligences, and

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cars became our forms of transportation.

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The number

of the

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increased drastically throughout

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100 years. On the one

hand these

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hand, these

vehicles increased people's life speed, but on the other they are

great source

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a great source

of pollution, accidents and noise. Some people think that should be encouraged alternative form of transportation introduced international laws to control car ownership and use. I totally agree with

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statement. The

first

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reason is that less control of ownership of cars leads to a great number vehicles on the street. They, in a turn make a lot of

noize

sound of any kind (especially unintelligible or dissonant sound)

noise

nice

noises

, a huge air pollution. As

example we

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example, we

can take a look at Chinese

town Shanghai

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town, Shanghai

, where because of millions of cars people can't breath without masks. Number of cars should be limited by maximum CO2

emmision

the act of emitting; causing to flow forth

emissions

emission

, acceptable for the region. The

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reason is that high speed vehicles

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are

a source of traffic accidents. Many

lifes

a characteristic state or mode of living

lives

life

can be

safed

rescued; especially from the power and consequences of sin

saved

solved

by using,

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, bicycles,

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of cars. Despite the

wide spread

widely circulated or diffused

widespread

idea, that

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kind of vehicles as

skateboard

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a skateboard

or bicycle can't be used as daily mean of transportation, in many European

cities

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city's

citizens mostly use them to get to work or home. The

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reason is that the most part of the day people spend at work in sitting position.

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, in a case of traffic jam, owner of a car can spend a few additional hours in his vehicle chair, what has a really bad

consequences

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consequence

in a future. People can avoid

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situation by using of more healthy vehicles. In

conclusion i

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conclusion, I

conclusion I

want to underline importance of law control of car ownership and use, because less of it can lead to environmental problems.

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rise of the percentage of alternative form of transport lead to decreasing number of street accidents and increase

healthy

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health

of people.