You are going to another country to study. You would like to do a part-time job while you are studying, so you want to ask a friend who lives there for some help Write a letter to this friend. In your letter • give details of your study plans • explain why you want to get a part-time job • suggest how your friend could help you find a job start your letter with Dear...

Dear Sally, Hope things are fine with you I'

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really excited, as my departure date for New Zealand is drawing near, and I'

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busy with preparations. I'll need your help in finding a part-time job as soon as I touch down. I've enrolled at an institution called ABC English in Wellington, for a six-month

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course, full-time. It's quite expensive but I'

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hopeful of improving my pronunciation, especially. To help

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the cost of my

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, I plan to find a part-time job. Not only are the college fees rather high, but

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aware that rental accommodation in the capital city won't be cheap.

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need to spend quite a bit on food. So, I'd very much like to arrange temporary employment before l arrive. I was wondering if you could ask around among your friends and colleagues to see if anyone wants a house cleaner, gardener, or nanny for their children. I know you have a wide social network in Wellington

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you could canvas for me

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if you wouldn't mind. I'd be grateful. Look forward to seeing you soon. Best wishes Margot