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The principal is considering a new grading policy that replaces letter or number grades on report cards with pass or fail. What is your position concerning this issue? Write an essay stating your position and supporting it with convincing reasons.

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Some schools in the U.
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 and replaced it by the “Pass-Fail”
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. There are differing viewpoints for both grading systems. Some students prefer the letter grades, while other students prefer a generic grading
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 as “Pass-Fail”
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. In my opinion, I am against the “Pass-Fail”
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 because
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 does not provide a precise measurement of how well students are doing. Evaluating students’ progress requires a precise measure. If a
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 receives a “C”, he knows that he is ranked as average in a class.
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 may work harder in order to get a better grade.
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, the “Pass-Fail”
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 does not show precisely where he falls among other students.
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, the “A to F” grading
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 may
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 increase students’ motivation in learning. To illustrate, I remember I got a “C” in one of my assignments;
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 assignment because I wanted to get a better grade. Another benefit of the “A to F”
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 is that letter grades are universally understood by many schools. If a
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 move school, the new school will be able to determine his academic ability by reviewing his grades. With the “Pass-Fail”
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, the new school may need more information to evaluate
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 new
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 but not least, most universities require students to meet their predetermined grade-point-average (GPA) as part of the admission requirements. Traditionally, GPA is derived from the grade of each subject.
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, it will be difficult to measure the
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’s ability using a “Pass-Fail”
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, some universities may not accept a
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’s admission without a GPA. In conclusion, the “A to F” grading
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 have existed for many years.
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 there are some areas of improvement,
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 is the best grading
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 in order to give a clear measure for a
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’s academic achievement.
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Fully explain your ideas

To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).

For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

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