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Some people believe that part time job can ensure better job opportunities in future. Others think job can easily distract students from study. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

#people #part #time #job #opportunities #future #students #study
In
this
 day and age, it is a lot of opinions how youth should spend their student’s life to get all opportunities for
this
 short and unique period in
life
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the life
 of everybody. It is suppose if have a part
time
job
 during
study
, students will realize what they want from
live
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life
 and where they need to go.
Another
Suggestion
Other
 people agree that
in
Suggestion
at
this
time
 students have to focus on the
study
 to receive deep knowledge and be professionals in the field. I am convinced that every
job
 discloses internal potential assisting to determine a future way of young people and find out strong sides of personality. Some people share the opinion that every student should have a
work
 experience to understand how money are earned and receive
opportunity
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the opportunity
an opportunity
opportunities
 to find
right way
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the right way
. Part
time
job
 provides
chance
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a chance
the chance
 to
work
 in various industries and improve
time
-managing skills being useful in daily life. To illustrate, my
groupmate
 was hired in
small hotel
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a small hotel
 in Chelyabinsk like a waitress and after half year she realized that
hospitality industry
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the hospitality industry
 is not her field where she
want
change location; move, travel, or proceed, also metaphorically
went
 to
work
.
On the other hand
, she improved stress tolerance, can perform several functions
in
Suggestion
at
 the same
time
 and discover that she enjoys working with people. Others believe that
work
 can destroy all aspiration to
study
 replacing knowledge by money.
Thus
, they are not able to find a good
job
 and lose motivation to receive
high
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higher
 education missing
opportunity
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opportunities
an opportunity
the opportunity
 to improve skills and broaden horizons.
For instance
, some students from my group gave up
study
 and went in different cities to
work
 in hotels and restaurants losing possibility to
study
 hospitality industry, have internships in international chains and receive high position after graduation. To conclude,
work
 experience during
study
 is
great opportunity
Suggestion
a great opportunity
 to recognize yourself remembering about
work
-
study
 balance. I adhere to the view that part
time
job
 has many advantages if you manage your
time
 in
right way
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the right way
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • practical experience
  • time management
  • professional network
  • enhance a resume
  • distract
  • academic pursuits
  • poor time management
  • stress
  • burnout
  • academic achievements
  • balance work and study
  • career goals
  • support system
  • part-time employment
  • prospective employers
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