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Last Wednesday you flew from London to Vancouver. When you arrived home, you discovered that you had left your hand luggage on the plane. Write a letter to the airline. In your letter, you should explain: where and when you lost your bag what your bag looks like what its contents were

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I am writing you
this
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 letter to report you
a lost hand luggage
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lost hand luggage
a lost hand suitcase
a piece of lost hand luggage
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. On the 5th of October, Wednesday, I flew from London going to Vancouver, flight BT123. To my dismay, I forgot to get my hand luggage on the cabin of the plane above my seat. The item
have
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 a sophisticated design of flamingo with white and pink
color
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colour
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 and the handle was
color
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colour
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 black hooked with a
colorful
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colourful
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 flowers key chain on the side. The bag is made of
a
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apply
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leather and slightly rough.It
also
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 has
transparent
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a transparent
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 packet at the front. It contains my personal kits like
,
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 make-up,
hair brush
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hairbrush
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,
strawberry
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strawberry-flavoured
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flavored
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flavoured
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 hand lotion
ans
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and
 black
sun glass
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sunglass
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. It
also
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 had my diary at the side packet and on the other side was my set of ponytails in different
colors
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 and patterns. At the back zipper
where
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were
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 my ticket and other documents to be found. I am looking forward
for
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 your quickest
respond
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The Greeting

Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.

Always start an informal letter in the ways:

  • Dear + name
  • Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:

  • Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
  • Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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