International tourism has brought enormous benefits to many places. At the same time, there is concern about its impact on local inhabitants and the environment. Do the disadvantages of international tourism outweigh the advantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Nowadays the international

tourism

rates increase drastically. Thereby influence of it on the local population, culture, animals an so on, should be

take

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taken

into consideration. On the one

hand there

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hand, there

are

great number

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a great number

of advantages, which

tourism

brings. On the other there are risks of the damage of locals. My point of view is that

tourism

volume should

increases

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increase

, but under

strickt

rigidly accurate; allowing no deviation from a standard

strict

government control, to avoid accidents.

Firstly

, as a reason for rising

tourism

should be named growing up the region's revenue, which

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leads

from the number of people coming to the area.

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Furthermore, in

a case of

wildlife site

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a wildlife site

additional money can be used to protect animals from poachers. The

second

reason is the increasing of people's

tolerancy

the power or capacity of an organism to tolerate unfavorable environmental conditions

tolerance

. After visiting another country with a totally different culture and traditions people begin

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to understand

other people better, which in a long-term period lead to global piece. As a

third

reason can be called migration. Some people has diseases, connected to the region. If a person with psoriasis will live in a warm region, his illness will be slighter. But without visiting

this

place he can even don't know about

this

. Talking about negative aspects of

tourism

can be called international conflicts, because of

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cultural

differences.

Also

accidentally destroyed of deformed historical or wildlife sites can be mentioned. After all, some regions can't allow bringing plant seeds because unique ecological systems can be influenced.

However all

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However, all

of

this

can be prevented by police or government facilities. In

conclusion I

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conclusion, I

want to repeat the idea that with sufficient government control

tourism

can bring only benefits, without negative consequences to the local inhabitants or nature.