You would like a temporary job working in a summer camp which runs sports and outdoor activities for children and young people next summer. Write a letter to the organizers of the summer camp. In your letter: 1. Explain what sort of job you would like to do.2. Describe your personality.3. Say what experience and skills you have.

Dear Sir, I am writing to you
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part time
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job in summer camp and I wonder if you help me. The job which
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would like to do is
chef
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a chef
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in summer camp as
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have
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ability to cook food for children. I will make kids
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preferable food. Being
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is suitable for me as
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have a good taste in cooking.
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I have
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creativity in making
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of foods which usually kids love to eat different type of foods.
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, multitasking is another aspect of my personality that I can manage all tasks simultaneously.
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, commitment to quality.
Hence
,
this
job is appropriate for me.

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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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