These days, many people have their own computer and telephone, so it is quite easy for them to do their job at home. Does working at home have more advantages or more disadvantages?

The widespread

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use

of the computers and telephones lead the quite massive alterations throughout various aspects of lives and the working areas where people seek to put

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the effort

in order to get an outcome regarding their

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profession

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been affected by

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trend. It is undeniable fact that the possibility of working outside of the

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offices, especially

at homes via portable

technologic

the practical application of science to commerce or industry

technology

devices harbours backwards.

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, I strongly argue that having the chance to work at home contains more advantages. It is generally argued by the ordinary and traditional workplace supporters that anywhere out of office possesses hazardous impact among individuals as

distractive

causing destruction or much damage

destructive

elements occur more frequently.

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of all, people who had to focus on a specific activity tend to be distracted easily by almost every outer interventions.

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, working in an office requires more strict shift regulations which

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provide

the capability of observing and monitoring among employees for the heads of the corporations.

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,

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sort of freedom enables to keep individuals out of the constant stress atmosphere and depressing feeling set from the workplace environment.

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, in a rainy and smoky day it might be more productive to pursue an idea on a comfortable chair in the living room rather than in a depressing and shared room by the colleagues.

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to that working from home via computers contributes

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a fair amount

fair amount

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of

time and money saving. In many metropolitans it is a common problem that the duration between work and

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places

a place

where people live is sometimes more than two hours in daily basis.

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that at least two meal per day amounts

unneglectable

impossible to avoid or evade

ineluctable

numbers which could have been accumulated as a personal equity. As a conclusion, the new trend of converting households as a part of work place by the favour of computer and telephone devices might have some

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consequences while the benefits of

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new trend clearly

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otherwise

the backwards in many distinctive ways.