You would like a temporary job working in a summer camp which runs sports and outdoor activities for children and young people next summer. Write a letter to the organizers of the summer camp. In your letter: 1. Explain what sort of job you would like to do.2. Describe your personality.3. Say what experience and skills you have.

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Dear Sir I am writing to you
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part time
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job at summer camp and I wonder if you help me. The job which I would like to do is
chef
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a chef
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in summer camp as
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have an ability to cook food for children. I will make kids
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preferable food. Being a chef is suitable for me as
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have a good taste in cooking.
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I have
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creativity in making
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of foods which usually kids love to eat different type of foods.
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, multitasking is another aspect of my personality that I can manage all tasks simultaneously.
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, commitment to quality.
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job is appropriate for me. As you can see from my resume, I have a voluntary certificate from the Chefs Institute of Pakistan. I can make
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of cuisines. I have
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experience in baking and I can make different types of bakery stuff.
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, I know the kitchen techniques very well which is required in
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. Other skills like consistency, hygiene, baking techniques, grilling, food preparation, ingredient selection, knife skills and presentation.  I look forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully XYZ

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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