Some people believe that part time job can be beneficial for better jobs in future. Others think it can easily distract students. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Nowadays,

part

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time

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jobs are more helpful for those students who are not from a well off family.

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The masses

believe that, doing

part

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time

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job

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will hinder the progress of the

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student but

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student, but

it is not,

more over it

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moreover, it

moreover it

will become an added advantage while searching for a full

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job

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. I completely believe and agree with

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and

i

refers to the speaker or writer

I

will indicate my view with examples. To start with,

off

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of

time

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occupations

are

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is

an added advantage for a

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while applying for an interview after finishing his education.

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, while hiring many companies will look for a candidate who has better communication skills and they

also

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want their employee to be a responsible person, who can effectively deal with the

coustomers

someone who pays for goods or services

customers

customer

.

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, if a

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has worked as

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a

sales representative in a company as a

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timer, whose major is a management

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subject, then

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it will be a great exposure for him to work in his own field of study

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to

this

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it will be more

helpfull

providing assistance or serving a useful function

helpful

for his future

also

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.

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, with a

part

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time

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job

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in hand

student

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will earn some money which may be

helpfull

providing assistance or serving a useful function

helpful

for him or his family

finantially

from a financial point of view

financially

.

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to that, the

student

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will feel more responsible and he will get some self confidence at the

time

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of his education period.

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, some may argue that students who are in

part

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time

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jobs are not willing to continue their studies and more over they are just settling down with their present

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time

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job

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, yes to an extent it is true but it may not be applicable for all. To conclude, It is better to carry on with a

part

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time

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position

in

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with

hands at the

student

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level to develop self confidence, as well as to gain some work knowledge, which we can show to the companies as an extra qualification for good

job

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prospects.