The bar chart below gives information about the percentage of the population living in urban areas in the whole world and in different parts of the world.

The bar chart below gives information about the percentage of the population living in urban areas in the whole world and in different parts of the world.
The bar chart illustrates the growth of the population between 1950-2030 in three different years.
according to
the chart, the
percentage
is getting higher. In 1950 there was a little
percentage
of people
lived
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in Africa and Asia but compearing to 2007 the
percentage
increased
more
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by more
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than double. But for Europe, Latin America and
it's
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its
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hue
differance
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difference
. The
percentage
is not but there
re
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are
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more people in 1950 than in Africa and Asia in 2007.
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for the whole world, it has increased but not nearly doubled.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words percentage with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • urbanization
  • percentage
  • population
  • regions
  • trends
  • global
  • increase/decrease
  • patterns
  • compare/contrast
  • noteworthy
  • industrialization
  • economic factors
  • migration
  • government policies
  • bar chart illustrates
  • overall trend
  • noticeable
  • particularly
  • summarize
  • highlight
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