The bar chart below gives information about the percentage of the population living in urban areas in the whole world and in different parts of the world.
The bar chart illustrates the growth of the population between 1950-2030 in three different years.
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of people lived
in Africa and Asia but compearing to 2007 the Change the form of the verb
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more people in 1950 than in Africa and Asia in 2007. Correct your spelling
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