It is neither possible nor useful for a country to provide university places for a high proportion of young people. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Education is the most vital element in human life.
Although
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it is not possible for a
country
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to provide a place in the
university
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for a maximum
number
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of young generations.
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Also it
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Also, it
can be less useful in later.I will discuss the both matter in my essay. It is true that a
country
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can not give
university
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access to all young people.There are many reasons behind it. The most important point is the lack of enough institutes which can take the
lager
large or big relative to something else
larger
number
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of students who want to complete their
university
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degree
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.Another point is the
uneduquate
not having a good education
uneducated
inadequate
bugdet
a sum of money allocated for a particular purpose
budget
.
For example
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, if the
governmet
the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit
government
does not have enough budget for spreading education all over the
country
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than it will more difficult to make new
university
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.
Thus
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the
number
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of
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university
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universities
will not increase.
As a result
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, it is not possible for the
goverment
the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit
government
to give places for huge
number
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of people in
university
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.
Besides
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,
government
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the government
also
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has to complete others
fundemental
serving as an essential component
fundamental
need of
citizen
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citizens
the citizen
.
In addition
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, making roads is
aslo
in addition
also
necessary compare to make
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university
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a university
. On
ther
definite article
the
other hand, giving access a large
number
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of people to
university
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can't be useful at the same time.Because,
university
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degree
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is not mandatory for everyone to get success in life.
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Also there
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Also, there
are many institutes who can provide
same level
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the same level
of a
degree
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.
Hence
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,
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university
Suggestion
the university
is not only provide
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is not only providing
has not only provided
is not only provided
quality education.
For instance
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, it is better to get
practical
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a practical degree
degree
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in a college rather than a
theoritical
concerned primarily with theories or hypotheses rather than practical considerations
theoretical
theoretically
vertical
degree
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in a
university
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.
Moreover
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, if someone
spend
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spends
a lot of money to complete a
university
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degree
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and can't get a good job later because of
increasing unemployment rate
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an increasing unemployment rate
than it has no value. To conclude, it is better to provide quality education.It doesn't matter whether it is a
university
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or college.To be added, it is impossible for a
country
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to create enough
university
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for all qualified people because of money.

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