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Some people say that school children should learn how to grow food and cook with it in their lessons. What is your opinion about that?

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School is an important place to learn, most of the time a student spends is in an institution. A major
part
 of learning is done in an academic environment and maximum
life
 skills are developed in a human during of study span. I believe that, school children should learn how to grow
food
 and cook with in their lessons as eating is
part
 of everyday
life
 and is highly required by all living things. Nothing can survive without
food
,
however cooking
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However, cooking
However cooking
 plays a
mojor
of greater importance or stature or rank
major
 role in the process of eating
therefore
,
its
it is
it's
 important to know how to produce basic
food
 and
also
 how to cook it.
Firstly
, consuming
ediable
suitable for use as food
edible
 products is most needed for every living organism. Human
being eat
Suggestion
will eat
 for gaining energy, to maintain health, to grow and
also
 enjoy various
variety
Suggestion
varieties
 of taste.
School
Suggestion
The school
 should make it a
part
 of their academic by teaching students how
ot
in the direction of
to
 produce fruits and vegetables know as enrichment in
life
 skills.
Therefore acquiring
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Therefore, acquiring
 the skill of being a producer could help the student to develop organic and fresh
food
 in their respective garden, develop patience and
sense
Suggestion
a sense
 of caring which constitute a great place in child development. In my
opinion it
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opinion, it
 is highly
appreciateble
enough to be estimated or measured
appreciable
 if planting is made a
part
 of studies in school.
Secondly
, cooking as an activity which holds great importance in
life
. Every
food
 cannot be consumed raw,
therefore
 cooking carries
immense role
Suggestion
the immense role
 in everyday
life
. Acquiring the knowledge of cooking can help a person to manage
life
 in different situations, like P.G living, camping, independent
living etc
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living, etc.
living etc.
 making an individual less dependent. I support the fact that everyone should be aware of using the kitchen and the components in it. To conclude, the topic,
anaylisng
 from person
life
 I strongly support the opinion of including the art of growing vegetation and fruits along with basic cookery in education trying to make an individual capable to manage survival in all circumstances as well as meeting the goals of education.
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