Completing university education is thought by some to be the best way to get a good job. On the other hand other people think that getting experience and developing soft skills is more important. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Millions
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Million
people in the world get
high
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higher
education
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.Some people suspect that studying in a
university
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or college is really important for future job
,
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,
while others urge that to be
expeirenced
having experience; having knowledge or skill from observation or participation
experienced
experience
is more necessary. There are too many
unniversities
the body of faculty and students at a university
universities
throughout the world.To gain graduate diploma become popular among people.For most of people study in a
university
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is the meaning of their life.
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,
such
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individuals tend to spend too much for their
education
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.
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Moreover they
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Moreover, they
spend all of their energy by hard learning and do not pay attention to their well-being as more as
their
people in general
they
study.It is obvious that not all people who have diplomas
work
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on high salary jobs or even
work
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somewhere.The reason is that most of them do not have
work
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experience and are not ready to
work
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on
prestigous
having an illustrious reputation; respected
prestigious
companies.As most of
such
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offices require
defenite
unlike in nature or quality or form or degree
different
years of experience.It can take too many
years both
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years, both
to get
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education
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educated
and
work
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somewhere.
On the other hand
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there are too many advantages to study in traditional
intitutes
set up or lay the groundwork for
institutes
.
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at
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of
all
,
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many people imply that persons with
high
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higher
education
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have wide
worldoutlook
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world outlook
.It is really enjoyable to have discussions with
well-educated person
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well - educated people
a well - educated person
.
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,
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,
for most companies it is essential to have high-qualified employee. In the
university
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students are able to get a lot of friends
,
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,
to learn so many subjects and other
nessesary
absolutely essential
necessary
knowledge from
high
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highly
qualified teachers. Overall
,
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,
pros
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the pros
outweight
be heavier than
outweigh
cons.I strongly believe that studying in a
university
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is a great ability to broaden
horrizons
the line at which the sky and Earth appear to meet
horizons
,
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to be more sociable and to learn a lot of things.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • theoretical knowledge
  • specialized training
  • networking
  • baseline requirement
  • financial burden
  • hands-on experience
  • practical skills
  • soft skills
  • dynamic job market
  • entrepreneur
  • formal education
  • portfolio
  • hybrid approach
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