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The only way to solve the increasing crime rate Of young offenders is to teach parents better parenting skills. To what extent do you agree?

#crime #rate #offenders #parents #skills
The climbing rate of j
uveline
of or relating to or characteristic of or appropriate for children or young people
juvenile
delinquency has led to the debate of better parenting classes. To which people believe, it is the only reason behind
this
 increase.
However
, I do not agree with the said statement and various arguments support my opinion. To start with, increase in crime rates by juvenile has nothing to do with teaching parenting skills as no parent want their young ones to become a criminal and
therefore
, every parent tries to pass on good thoughts and habits to their child.
Moreover
, just giving l
esson
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a lesson
lessons
on parenting will not solve the aforementioned issue. As, children
also
 equip knowledge, thoughts and habits from their teachers and friends at school. In my o
pion,
a personal belief or judgment that is not founded on proof or certainty
opinion
 to reduce
this
 crime rate by youngsters, harsh steps n
eeds
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need
to be taken by both governments and parents.
Firstly
, government need to reduce the age of juvenile trial so that the youngster doing the crime should be treated as an adult in court of law and
hence
, can be given harsh punishment than before.
Secondly
, parents need to teach their children about these offences and why are they considered as so.
Also
, parents should keep an eye on their young o
nes
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one
one's
f
riends
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friends'
circle and their content of TV programmes as these have m
ajor impact
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a major impact
on their mind at
this
 age. Violent serials can lead to dangerous thoughts and
thus
 lead to h
enious
extremely wicked, deeply criminal
heinous
crimes.
For instance
, In Australia a
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A
16 year old child, killed 12 of his friends after watching a thriller web series which was extremely brutal in nature. To conclude, teaching better parenting skills is not the only way to curb child offenders. S
ociety including
Accept comma addition
Society, including
the government needs to work as a single unit in
this
 area and make b
etter future
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a better future
for the young ones.

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