The graph and table below show the average monthly temperatures and the average number of sunshine hours per year in three major city Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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chart and table display the average Linking Words
temperature
in twelve months and annual sunshine Use synonyms
hours
in 3 different cities respectively which are Use synonyms
London
, New Use synonyms
York
, and Use synonyms
Sydney
.
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Overall
, Linking Words
London
has the shortest Use synonyms
day time
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daytime
while
New Linking Words
York
and Use synonyms
Sydney
had similar sunshine Use synonyms
hours
. For Use synonyms
temperature
, New Use synonyms
York
and Use synonyms
London
have the same pattern of a line graph with slight differences; Use synonyms
however
, Linking Words
Sydney
’s Use synonyms
temperature
is completely different from the other two.
In Use synonyms
London
and New Use synonyms
York
, their Use synonyms
temperature
patterns look very similar to each other. In the first three months of the Use synonyms
year
, their average temperatures are lower than 15 Use synonyms
degrees
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while
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Use synonyms
Sydney
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Sydney's
temperature
reaches 26 Use synonyms
degrees
in January which is considered Use synonyms
to
the hottest period Change preposition
apply
of
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in
Sydney
. In the middle of the Use synonyms
year
, temperatures in New Use synonyms
York
and Use synonyms
London
increase significantly to reach the highest point at 29 and 24 Use synonyms
degrees
respectively in July. Use synonyms
In contrast
, the Linking Words
temperature
in Use synonyms
Sydney
drop dramatically and reach its lowest Use synonyms
temperature
at 16 Use synonyms
degrees
in July. Use synonyms
At the end
of the Linking Words
year
, the average temperatures of each city changed to be the same pattern as Use synonyms
the
beginning of the Change preposition
at the
year
.
New Use synonyms
York
is the city that has the longest annual Use synonyms
day time
which is 2535 Correct your spelling
daytime
hours
. Use synonyms
Sydney
’s Use synonyms
hours
are slightly lower than in New Use synonyms
York
by 62 Use synonyms
hours
. Use synonyms
On the other hand
, Linking Words
London
is considered to be the shortest Use synonyms
day time
city among the other two and the average annual Correct your spelling
daytime
hours
are less than half of Use synonyms
Sydney
’s Use synonyms
hour
.Fix the agreement mistake
hours
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