The graph and table below show the average monthly temperatures and the average number of sunshine hours per year in three major city Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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This
chart and table display the average temperature
in twelve months and annual sunshine hours
in 3 different cities respectively which are London
, New York
, and Sydney
.
Overall
, London
has the shortest day time
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daytime
while
New York
and Sydney
had similar sunshine hours
. For temperature
, New York
and London
have the same pattern of a line graph with slight differences; however
, Sydney
’s temperature
is completely different from the other two.
In London
and New York
, their temperature
patterns look very similar to each other. In the first three months of the year
, their average temperatures are lower than 15 degrees
while
Sydney
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Sydney's
temperature
reaches 26 degrees
in January which is considered to
the hottest period Change preposition
apply
of
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in
Sydney
. In the middle of the year
, temperatures in New York
and London
increase significantly to reach the highest point at 29 and 24 degrees
respectively in July. In contrast
, the temperature
in Sydney
drop dramatically and reach its lowest temperature
at 16 degrees
in July. At the end
of the year
, the average temperatures of each city changed to be the same pattern as the
beginning of the Change preposition
at the
year
.
New York
is the city that has the longest annual day time
which is 2535 Correct your spelling
daytime
hours
. Sydney
’s hours
are slightly lower than in New York
by 62 hours
. On the other hand
, London
is considered to be the shortest day time
city among the other two and the average annual Correct your spelling
daytime
hours
are less than half of Sydney
’s hour
.Fix the agreement mistake
hours
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