the government investments in arts , music and theatre is a waste of money. Governments should invest these funds in public services instead. To what extend do you agree with this statement
Where to
investing
Suggestion
invest
invests
is investing
tex
payer's money is very critical decision for a ruling party in any nation, as it will be affected to charge against a citizen's person or property or activity for the support of government
tax
number
of people, along with various Suggestion
a number
the number
bussiness
. I a commercial or industrial enterprise and the people who constitute it
businesses
business
am partially agree
with the Suggestion
partially agree
have partially agreed
statment
that public fund should be invested in helping public not in promoting local arts.
In a a message that is stated or declared; a communication (oral or written) setting forth particulars or facts etc
statement
statements
devloping
relating to societies in which capital needed to industrialize is in short supply
developing
contries
, Where a transport system requires attention from Suggestion
country
countries
parlament
for public transport, a legislative assembly in certain countries
parliament
Government
should focus on that. Creating new Suggestion
the Government
theaters
and auditoriums for people, who love a building where theatrical performances or motion-picture shows can be presented
theatres
features
art
, are not Wise investment. For instance
, Shri lankan
transport system is not good Suggestion
Lankan
enogh
for their public. With acknowledgement of that, if as much as necessary
enough
Goverment
would start building Suggestion
the Government
Government
art musuem
and auditorium, it would not appreciated by their government. Suggestion
art museums
art museum
an art museum
Hence
, Government
has to focus on Daily needs upon Creativity and Entretainment.
Suggestion
the Government
Additionally
, A country has to give an encouragment
to their local the expression of approval and support
encouragement
art
for preservation of culture and tradition. What would happen if future generation
of Suggestion
future generations
the future generation
a future generation
canada
does not have an idea of how to a nation in northern North America; the French were the first Europeans to settle in mainland Canada
Canada
creat
maple make or cause to be or to become
create
craft
syurup
? It is a thick sweet sticky liquid
syrup
also
important that we invest currencies in art
, Which are also
reflection
of our Suggestion
a reflection
reflections
the reflection
specialites
, which make us proud on an asset of special worth or utility
specialities
specialists
globe
. Suggestion
the globe
a globe
For example
, Canadain government
has invested Suggestion
the Canadian government
Canadian government
lot
Suggestion
lots
of
money in maple's farm to promote local Suggestion
in
art
of creating maple syrup. It proves that Arts also
have as impact on public life as public services, in which we have to invest.
At the end, I would like to shed equal light on both aspect
of investing people's money, for people.Suggestion
aspects
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