The diagrams below show the design for a wave-energy machine and its location. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagrams below show the design for a wave-energy machine and its location.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The design and placement for a wave-energy
machine
are presented
on
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the
illustratiion
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illustration
.
In the
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first illustration, it shows how the was-energy
machine
works. It starts when the wave is directed to enter the chambers, which results in the rise of
water
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the water
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level. When the
water
reaches the appropriate level, it would
then
,
enter
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the airflow on the upper
chamber
rising up and out above. After which the cycle will continue as airflow from the outside enters
in
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the upper
chamber
causing the turbine to spin and power the electricity generator. The airflow now
,
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goes down to the lower
chamber
and
in
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the
water
.
On the other
hand
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the
second
illustration is about the location of the
machine
. These machines
has
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two possible placement. It can either be on a low installation cost, where only small waves
goes
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inside the
chamber
or a high installation cost, which is when
a
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large
waves
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enters the
chamber
, since it is located deeper in the
water
bed, and would result in the high output . Both
location
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of the wave-energy
machine
differs in
the
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location and causing one to receive more and the other less.
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words machine, water, chamber with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "goes" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "goes" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "wave" was used 3 times.

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