Some people say History is one of the most important school subjects. Other people think that, in today's world, subjects like Science and Technology are more important than History. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

To learn the past and present,
History
and
Science
and Technology have become
two
to a degree exceeding normal or proper limits
too
critical courses at
school
. It has become a controversial topic to regard which one is the most important among the
school
subjects. In
this
essay, I would like to outline both views.
To begin
with,
History
is regarded important for it lays the foundation for the development of
human being
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human beings
the human being
.
First
of all,
history
can help us avoid making mistakes.
For
example
, in the Song Dynasty, the emperor valued literary talent above martial arts.
Therefore
, though literacy has been greatly improved and few instances of usurpation of power occurred during the time, the military development is greatly limited.
As a result
, during the 300 years of its establishment, foreign nations kept attacking the
country but
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country, but
hardly can the Song army hit back and eventually the dynasty overthrow. Having learned the lesson, our country nowadays put an emphasis on improving military power while keeping a balance to construct internal affairs. What’s more, the
culture
handed down from generation to generation has already become the symbol of Chinese spirit. Spreading traditional Chinese
culture
to other countries contributes to the enhancement of friendship.
For
example
, Confucius is one of the great sages in ancient China. His wisdom and
culture
deeply influences every Chinese people and is regarded as a symbol of
Chinese nation
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the Chinese nation
.
As a result
, Confucius Institutes are established all over the world, serving as a place to spread Chinese language and
culture
,
also
strengthening the relationship among countries. On the other side, learning
Science
and Technology brings us a lot of benefits. It can improve our present and
future
lives. As for now, we can make our lives more efficient and convenient through using what is learned in the subject.
For
example
, when we want
make
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to make
a cup of sweet water, we would know to heat the water
first
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first, then
then
to put the sugar, since we have learned in the
science
class
that higher temperature helps
sugar
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the sugar
dissolve faster. For the
future
, we are better equipped with the knowledge
that is
required for the
future
innovation.
For instance
, one of the tasks students are ordered to do in
Science
and Technology
class
is making a smart robot that can run on its own.
This
requires a combination of knowledge of program designing, circuit arrangement, and Mechanics, enabling an improvement made in students’ comprehensive practical ability. At the same time, it cultivated students’ potential to make innovation in
science
and technology on their own, like making new types of new energy vehicle, in the
future
.
However
, from my point of view, compared to
History
,
Science
and Technology is still more beneficial for our present and
future
life. Take the invention of electric light as an
example
.
History
books can tell us that Edison created the bulb, but only through the
Science
and Technology classes can we realize how the bulbs are made.
As a result
, it is made possible for students to create
more environmental
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more environmentally
friendly and energy saving bulbs on their own. What we can learn from
school
history
course are more of the great events that promote the development of human civilization. We can learn the historical facts, but very little can we know mechanism of them. As
science
and technology develop rapidly today,
school
History
courses are preparing us less directly and effectively for taking pioneers’ turn to make technological innovation for all human
being
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beings
. All in all,
although
I think
science
and technology course is more important than
history
class
, but in the trend of an increasing need for all rounded talents, we cannot completely ignore the
history
class
. Only having an understanding of the present and past, can we make greater contribution to all mankind.
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  • comprehend
  • retrospect
  • gain insights
  • reflect on
  • sharpen
  • evaluate
  • significance
  • heritage
  • legacy
  • advent
  • breakthroughs
  • sustain
  • sustainability
  • revolutions
  • empowered
  • overcome
  • transform
  • advancements
  • collaboration
  • cooperation
  • diversity
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