It is right that university graduates earn more money than less well-educated people and for this reason some people believe university students should pay the full cost of their education. Others, however argue that higher education should be provide for free by the government. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Many people hold the view that
university
education
should be free to everyone regardless of their background;
however
, others think that students attending
university
should take responsibility for the
tuition
fee because of the higher salary they can have after obtaining a
university
degree. From my point of view, I agree with the
later
referring to the second of two things or persons mentioned (or the last one or ones of several)
latter
view and
this
essay will provide the reasonings for both views. On the one hand, it is easy to understand why some people think the government should provide free tertiary
education
.
First
, since parents will be encouraged to send their children to school.
Infact
Suggestion
In fact
, without concerning about the fee, more and more students will have
chance
Suggestion
the chance
a chance
to study at
university
after graduating from the
highschool
Suggestion
high school
to get higher
education
and skills which will be
essencial
absolutely necessary; vitally necessary
essential
in later life.
Second
, without paying any cost, students will concentrate on studying and extracurricular activities. Clearly,
instead
of exhausting themselves with part-time jobs to cover both
tuition
fees and living costs, they have more time for studying, playing sports, volunteering or pursuing an internship.
On the other hand
, I must side with those who think students and parents should take responsibility for their
tuition
fees when studying at
university
.
First
, providing free
university
education
might push the government to the verge of bankruptcy.
Besides
education
,
government budget
Suggestion
the government budget
is used to invest in technology, transportation, infrastructure and
healthcare
Suggestion
health care
. With the growth of
number
Suggestion
the number
of students studying
tuition
-free, there will not be enough money for other services which are
also
essenssial
absolutely necessary; vitally necessary
essential
to residents.
Furthermore
, the quality of
education
will be better with the financial support from students and their parents. Students will have an effective studying environment with well-equipped facilities and well-qualified teachers. If students are accountable for their
tuition
fees, they will value more the lessons, have a deep understanding and put what they learn into practice effectively. In conclusion, while attending
university
without fee helps students with financial problems, I feel it brings about more benefits to society and students themselves when they pay the full cost for their
education
.
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