It is right that university graduates earn more money than less well-educated people and for this reason some people believe university students should pay the full cost of their education. Others, however argue that higher education should be provide for free by the government. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Many people hold the view that

university

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education

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should be free to everyone regardless of their background;

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, others think that students attending

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should take responsibility for the

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fee because of the higher salary they can have after obtaining a

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degree. From my point of view, I agree with the

later

referring to the second of two things or persons mentioned (or the last one or ones of several)

latter

view and

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essay will provide the reasonings for both views. On the one hand, it is easy to understand why some people think the government should provide free tertiary

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.

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, since parents will be encouraged to send their children to school.

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In fact

, without concerning about the fee, more and more students will have

chance

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the chance

a chance

to study at

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after graduating from the

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high school

to get higher

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and skills which will be

essencial

absolutely necessary; vitally necessary

essential

in later life.

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, without paying any cost, students will concentrate on studying and extracurricular activities. Clearly,

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of exhausting themselves with part-time jobs to cover both

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fees and living costs, they have more time for studying, playing sports, volunteering or pursuing an internship.

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, I must side with those who think students and parents should take responsibility for their

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fees when studying at

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, providing free

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education

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might push the government to the verge of bankruptcy.

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,

government budget

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the government budget

is used to invest in technology, transportation, infrastructure and

healthcare

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health care

. With the growth of

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the number

of students studying

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-free, there will not be enough money for other services which are

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essenssial

absolutely necessary; vitally necessary

essential

to residents.

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, the quality of

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will be better with the financial support from students and their parents. Students will have an effective studying environment with well-equipped facilities and well-qualified teachers. If students are accountable for their

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fees, they will value more the lessons, have a deep understanding and put what they learn into practice effectively. In conclusion, while attending

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without fee helps students with financial problems, I feel it brings about more benefits to society and students themselves when they pay the full cost for their

education

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.