Some people say that children should play games which require teamwork such as football and basketball whereas, some think they should be doing individual sports such as swimming and running. Do you agree or disagree?

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time, youngsters should play kind of

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like football and basketball which require teamwork.

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, I believe that

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play individual

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as swimming and running. On the one hand, in my opinion, there are several benefits for

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when they play teammate

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, it is often more enjoyable when

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can play with their friends.

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recent research, scientists have confirmed that the number of

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with their peers is more satisfying than those who play alone.

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these types of

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can learn how to communicate and be a part of a team.

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, in order to win a match of a game, they cannot rely on solely one person, so they have to work together and make a plan to achieve their goal.

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believe participating in individual activities has many advantages. One advantage is that playing alone is much easier because they do not have to gather a group of people to operate a game.

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, if a child wants to improve his running performance,

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of wasting time waiting to run with someone, he can practice whenever he wants. Another advantage is that the development of

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as independence is attributed mostly

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doing individual activities.

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ability plays an important role in the success of a person

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kind of person is capable of leading

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. In conclusion,

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team activities have many positive consequences

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, individual

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have their own advantages. So, I would argue that

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should play both types of

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