Some people say that children should play games which require teamwork such as football and basketball whereas, some think they should be doing individual sports such as swimming and running. Do you agree or disagree?

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time, youngsters should play kind of

games

like football and basketball which require teamwork.

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, I believe that

children

should

also

play individual

games

such

as swimming and running. On the one hand, in my opinion, there are several benefits for

children

when they play teammate

games

.

Firstly

, it is often more enjoyable when

children

can play with their friends.

According to

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recent research, scientists have confirmed that the number of

children

playing

games

with their peers is more satisfying than those who play alone.

Secondly

,

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these types of

games

,

children

can learn how to communicate and be a part of a team.

For example

, in order to win a match of a game, they cannot rely on solely one person, so they have to work together and make a plan to achieve their goal.

On the other hand

, I

also

believe participating in individual activities has many advantages. One advantage is that playing alone is much easier because they do not have to gather a group of people to operate a game.

For instance

, if a child wants to improve his running performance,

instead

of wasting time waiting to run with someone, he can practice whenever he wants. Another advantage is that the development of

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as independence is attributed mostly

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doing individual activities.

This

ability plays an important role in the success of a person

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because

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kind of person is capable of leading

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and

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high

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. In conclusion,

although

team activities have many positive consequences

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children

, individual

games

also

have their own advantages. So, I would argue that

children

should play both types of

games

.