Many working people get little or no exercise either during the working day or in their free time and have health problems as a result. Why do many working people not get enough exercise? What can be done about this problem?

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Exercising daily plays very important role in keeping the human body physically active and fit, it maintains the immune system and
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the internal organs healthy. We can find many of the working people getting a very little or even no exercise, either it is a working day or a free
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. Are they doing it any good for their health? Obviously not, their procrastination will eventually lead towards health problems. Today humans are working like machines. They get very little spare
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during their working days and
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in
free
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the free time
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they are busy in some recreational activities or with family. An average working human has a very tough working schedule on
average working day
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an average working day
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, I would like to give an example of my
neighbor
a person who lives (or is located) near another
neighbour
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, who is
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a very good friend of mine. My
neighbor
a person who lives (or is located) near another
neighbour
has a job from 9:00
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to
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5:00 p.
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., but for the job he has to commute 1.5 hours daily. When he reaches home at 6:30 p.
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.
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7:00 p.
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., depending upon the traffic congestion, he is already very exhausted. Even if he is exhausted, there are some domestic home works as
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well, which
he has to do along with his family. Whenever, I ask him about coming for jogging with me, my
neighbor
a person who lives (or is located) near another
neighbour
refuses because of less
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and exhaustion.
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, talking about free
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time let
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time, let
me be very clear, for
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people there is nothing like free
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. They already have plans for themselves on how to be occupied in their off timings from work. Taking
family
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the family
out for leisure and recreational activities are some of their excuses to not
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get
to exercise. In
bottom line
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the bottom line
, I would suggest that people should make their
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schedule in
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manner that they should have their spare
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for their physical activities. It is only you who can take care of yourself. Spare
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and make exercise a mandatory routine in daily life, even if it is for a shorter span of 15 to 20 minutes. Investing your
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healthy routine will definitely save you from health problems and probable sick
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Time constraints
  • Sedentary lifestyle
  • Passive leisure activities
  • Workplace wellness programs
  • Active commuting
  • Subsidized
  • Public awareness
  • Health benefits
  • Incentivizing
  • Accessible public spaces
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