Many working people get little or no exercise either during the working day or in their free time and have health problems as a result. Why do many working people not get enough exercise? What can be done about this problem?

#people #exercise #time #health

Exercising daily plays very important role in keeping the human body physically active and fit, it maintains the immune system and

also

the internal organs healthy. We can find many of the working people getting a very little or even no exercise, either it is a working day or a free

time

. Are they doing it any good for their health? Obviously not, their procrastination will eventually lead towards health problems. Today humans are working like machines. They get very little spare

time

during their working days and

also

free

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the free time

time

they are busy in some recreational activities or with family. An average working human has a very tough working schedule on

average working day

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an average working day

For instance

, I would like to give an example of my

neighbor

a person who lives (or is located) near another

neighbour

neighbours

, who is

also

a very good friend of mine. My

neighbor

a person who lives (or is located) near another

neighbour

has a job from 9:00

have the quality of being; (copula, used with an adjective or a predicate noun)

Suggestion

5:00 p.

., but for the job he has to commute 1.5 hours daily. When he reaches home at 6:30 p.

introduces an alternative

7:00 p.

., depending upon the traffic congestion, he is already very exhausted. Even if he is exhausted, there are some domestic home works as

well which

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well, which

he has to do along with his family. Whenever, I ask him about coming for jogging with me, my

neighbor

a person who lives (or is located) near another

neighbour

refuses because of less

time

and exhaustion.

Furthermore

, talking about free

time let

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time, let

me be very clear, for

such

people there is nothing like free

time

. They already have plans for themselves on how to be occupied in their off timings from work. Taking

family

Suggestion

the family

out for leisure and recreational activities are some of their excuses to not

getting

Suggestion

get

to exercise. In

bottom line

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the bottom line

, I would suggest that people should make their

time

schedule in

such

manner that they should have their spare

time

for their physical activities. It is only you who can take care of yourself. Spare

time

and make exercise a mandatory routine in daily life, even if it is for a shorter span of 15 to 20 minutes. Investing your

time

healthy routine will definitely save you from health problems and probable sick

time

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Topic Vocabulary:

Time constraints
Sedentary lifestyle
Passive leisure activities
Workplace wellness programs
Active commuting
Subsidized
Public awareness
Health benefits
Incentivizing
Accessible public spaces

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Many working people get little or no exercise either during the working day or in their free time and have health problems as a result. Why do many working people not get enough exercise? What can be done about this problem?

Fully explain your ideas

In many countries, old or traditional languages are dying out or being forgotten, especially by younger people. Is this an acceptable development which occurs inevitably, or is it something which we should try to prevent?

Some people think that universities studentsshould specialise in a particular subject while others believe that they should study a range of subjects. Discus both views and give your opinion.

In many parts of the world, children are given more freedom than in the past. Is this a positive or negative development?

Some people say that the use of mobile phones should not be allowed in public places such as libraries, shops and on public transport. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Write an essay of about 300 words on the following topic: It has been said, "Not all learning takes place in the classroom." Compare and contrast knowledge gained from personal experience with knowledge gained from classroom instruction. In your opinion, which source is more important? Why?