The graph shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The demographics
shows
the different Change the verb form
show
population
ratings between countries like USA, Sweden and Japan. It has been noticed that the growth of population
of age 65 and over has been very evident from Add an article
the population
a population
year
1940 up to 2040.
United State of Change the article
the year
America
Change noun form
America's
population
65
and over Change preposition
of 65
year
1940 is only 9% and slowly rise by 5% Change the article
the year
1960
. Change preposition
in 1960
During
Change preposition
From
Correct article usage
the 1980’s
1980’s
to 2020 declined by 2%, Fix apostrophe usage
1980s
however
rise up again by almost 8% Add the comma(s)
,however
percent
.
Change the spelling
per cent
Sweden
Change noun form
Sweden's
population
for
65 and over increased from 3-4% every 2 decades.
For Japan, the Change preposition
of
population
got decrease
by 2% from 1940 up to 2000 and rose again from 2000 to 2040.
Wrong verb form
decreased
Therefore
, the graph shows that Sweden has increasing
Add an article
an increasing
figure
from the very beginning, Fix the agreement mistake
figures
the
survival rate of the elder is high and might affect Correct word choice
and the
future
economic stability, Correct article usage
the future
so
as USA and Japan. From the graph, the government will provide a developmental program that can support the economy and workforce.Correct word choice
apply
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