Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to improve such situations Discuss both views and give your opinion

It is said by
group
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a group
of persons that worst case
scenerio
an outline or synopsis of a play (or, by extension, of a literary work)
scenario
scenarios
such
as underpaid job or low on cash must situation must be adapted
for
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to
live.
Other
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Another
group of individuals
differ
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differs
this
opinion by doing something to better circumstances.
This
essay is going to
enlight
make understand
enlighten
enlist
both views on group and shares the view
by
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of
improving or working hard to embark better
future
. Accepting fate and not doing anything about it is the
coward
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coward's
way for tackling the situation. A
person
should endeavour the goal and do what must be done for growth, either it may be
job
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a job
or money. To cite an example, One doesn't know what he is capable of without trying and laying down crying does not help the scenario in one's favour. Every individual must explore their talent because practice makes a man perfect. Motivation and perfecting your skills is the key to change
future
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the future
which used to
seemed
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seem
as futile. As anything can be
achieved which
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achieved, which
is desired.
This
essay
also
shares the opinion as
their
in or at that place
there
is not alternate for
hardwork
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hard work
. As a lioness
also
has to master hunting skills in order to feed itself and survive in
jungle
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the jungle
. People who believe it is impossible to change
future
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the future
, and a
person
must accept his/her fate. Sometimes no matter how much a
person
tries, it
result
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results
into more worsening the situation. It can be said that in delicate situations, we must not change anything or else it will imbalance the whole scenario.
For example
, if a
person
is good at
cricket but
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cricket, but
, does not like playing as a cricket and cannot get any other job.
Then
must continue as a cricketer because he needs to earn his
livlihood
the financial means whereby one lives
livelihood
which is essential for survival. To
recaptulate
summarize briefly
recapitulate
the above facts, it can be said that anything can be
achived
to gain with effort
achieved
. What seemed to be impossible before are being achieved today.
Hence
, we should never give up and step up by crafting our own
future
.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • adversity
  • resilience
  • stoicism
  • contentment
  • cope
  • adapt
  • endure
  • persevere
  • settle
  • ambition
  • tenacious
  • determined
  • resourceful
  • optimistic
  • self-improvement
  • proactive
  • initiative
  • transform
  • overcome
  • confront
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