The chart below gives information on the percentage of british people giving money to charity by age range for the years 1990 and 2010.

The chart below gives information on the percentage of british people giving money to charity by age range for the years 1990 and 2010.
The bar chart illustrates money received by a
charity
in the years 1990 and 2010 as a percentage of British people by
age
group.
Overall
, it has been observed that the
age
bracket 18-25 donates the least amount of money
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charity
for both the years 1990 and 2010.
However
, when discerned for the highest payers, analysed that the
age
group 36-50 contributes the most to
charity
in the year 1990
whereas
51-65 in 2010. In 1990 it has been identified that the three
age
groups 18-25, 26-35 and 36-50 are willing to sponsor
charity
more as compared to the individuals falling under the same ranges in 2010.
This
marginal difference between the two years has decreased from 10% in (
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-25
age
range) to 6.5% in
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-50
age
range.
Although
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many people were willing to donate in the year 1990, a sharp decline is observed in the
age
groups 51 and above. It is shown that there has been a rise of 3-5%
of
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individuals paying capacity in the year 2010, for the previously mentioned
age
groups.

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