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estimated world illiteracy rates by region and by gender, 2000

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The bar graph gives data about the literacy rates of 6 regions by gender based on a
statistics
Suggestion
statistic
 gathered
on
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in
 the year 2000. It is observed that South Asian men and women have the highest rate of
illiteracy
 compared to the men and women
of
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 developed countries. In detail, record shows that the highest
illiteracy
 rate amounting to an average of 50% are women from the countries of South Asia, Arab States and Sub-Saharan Africa.
This
 results
to
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in
 the conclusion that these countries do not receive the right amount of education for the female population. Meanwhile, about 30% of the men of these countries do not possess the capabilities of reading and writing.
On the other hand
, East Asia, Latin America and developed countries reported less than a quarter of
illiteracy
 rates.
This
 goes to show that
first
 world countries can afford their people good and quality education,
thus
 the low reports of
illiteracy
 rates among their countries.

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