The growth of online shopping will one day lead to all shops in towns and cities closing. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.

#growth #shops #towns #cities

The argument that the growth of online shopping, in the rest of the essay e-shopping is used, will lead to shut down all shops in town and cities in n

ear future,

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the near future

is not absolutely true. I don’t agree with that, and in the coming essay I will depict it. On the

one

hand, some people claim that e-shopping will dominate the whole market in the coming few years. Due to tremendous advancement in computers, smartphones, and internet world, all these r

esult

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results

in easy access to online shops, and compare prices and qualities of the products you wish for while you’re holding your smartphone. And all it needs is to log into their website, write a request and order within f

ew hours

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a few hours

it will be delivered anywhere you desire! When it comes to e-shopping mainstays, companies like Amazon, and Alibaba come to mind. Amazon is number

one

in U

SA stock

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the USA stock

(s) market surpassing giant Tech. Companies; Microsoft, Google, and Facebook, and its o

wer

(law) someone who owns (is legal possessor of) a business

owner

power

is the richest man on the planet.

On the other hand

, some believe that ordinary shops will continue to play its role in the future. I bolster

this

argument. In the beginning of 2019 the giant e-shopping Alibaba made unprecedented profit 39 billion USD in

one

day!

Although

this

colossal profit is considered a deduction from o

rdinary shopping share

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an ordinary shopping share

ordinary shopping shares

in the market, it will never eliminate (threat the existence of) ordinary shops. Recently, when I was about to buy e

xternal flash drive

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an external flash drive

I leaned to the internet, compared prices between various websites, and picked the cheapest

one

, but I found a better price in

one

of the shops while I was h

angging

decoration that is hung (as a tapestry) on a wall or over a window

hanging

out with friends and I went for it at the end! The bottom line — from my point of view — is, to have both e-shopping and ordinary shops work together, in order to encourage a competition which will l

eads

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lead

to a reasonable-price shopping in favour of costumers. Enabling options to choose f

rom which

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from, which

result in enforcing (boosting) country’s economy.

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e-commerce
brick-and-mortar
physical stores
online retailers
retail apocalypse
digital economy
consumer behavior
sustainability
commercial landscape
high-street
consumer trends
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showrooms
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