The growth of online shopping will one day lead to all shops in towns and cities closing. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.

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The argument that the growth of online shopping, in the rest of the essay e-shopping is used, will lead to shut down all shops in town and cities in n

ear future,

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the near future

is not absolutely true. I don’t agree with that, and in the coming essay I will depict it. On the

one

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hand, some people claim that e-shopping will dominate the whole market in the coming few years. Due to tremendous advancement in computers, smartphones, and internet world, all these r

esult

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results

in easy access to online shops, and compare prices and qualities of the products you wish for while you’re holding your smartphone. And all it needs is to log into their website, write a request and order within f

ew hours

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a few hours

it will be delivered anywhere you desire! When it comes to e-shopping mainstays, companies like Amazon, and Alibaba come to mind. Amazon is number

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in U

SA stock

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the USA stock

(s) market surpassing giant Tech. Companies; Microsoft, Google, and Facebook, and its o

wer

(law) someone who owns (is legal possessor of) a business

owner

power

is the richest man on the planet.

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, some believe that ordinary shops will continue to play its role in the future. I bolster

this

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argument. In the beginning of 2019 the giant e-shopping Alibaba made unprecedented profit 39 billion USD in

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day!

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this

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colossal profit is considered a deduction from o

rdinary shopping share

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an ordinary shopping share

ordinary shopping shares

in the market, it will never eliminate (threat the existence of) ordinary shops. Recently, when I was about to buy e

xternal flash drive

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an external flash drive

I leaned to the internet, compared prices between various websites, and picked the cheapest

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, but I found a better price in

one

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of the shops while I was h

angging

decoration that is hung (as a tapestry) on a wall or over a window

hanging

out with friends and I went for it at the end! The bottom line — from my point of view — is, to have both e-shopping and ordinary shops work together, in order to encourage a competition which will l

eads

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lead

to a reasonable-price shopping in favour of costumers. Enabling options to choose f

rom which

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from, which

result in enforcing (boosting) country’s economy.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

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334 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

e-commerce
brick-and-mortar
physical stores
online retailers
retail apocalypse
digital economy
consumer behavior
sustainability
commercial landscape
high-street
consumer trends
augmented reality
showrooms
carbon footprint

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