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Many people are involved in sports when they are young but stop once they are adult, why do many adults stop doing physical exercise? what can be done about this problem.

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Compare to past, nowadays participation
,
Accept space
,
 adult in sports has
decrease
Suggestion
decreased
 dramatically. I believe there are several reasons why
this
 negative trend is becoming more common and some remedies we can adopt. The
first
 reason is the imbalance in
work
 and like which adults embark their
work
 and they don't time to take part in physical activities. In terms of time, young people have enough spare time to participate in sports. The
second
 reason is adult people feel exhausted after
work
 due to
work
 hours,
workload
.
As a result
, they want to take a relaxing after long
work
.
Finally
, people become lethargic with progression of age and a sedentary lifestyle. So in terms of
tecnology
the practical application of science to commerce or industry
technology
 in current times there are a lot of machines perform household chores which
are make
Suggestion
make
are made
 things easier. It
cause
Suggestion
causes
 lack of physical activities in
theire
of them or themselves
their
there
 daily life. Turning to possible solution one key step people should have a well-defined routine which is involved in sports, gym, running and so on. They should keep balanced between
work
 and life. In many countries, it looks too impossible due to working hours. Another way to tackle
implemention
Suggestion
the implementation
implementation
 of strict policies by government about employers and employees in which working hours and
workload
. Reducing working hours and
workload
 make possible to do physical
work
 in their adulthood. Government play important role on
this
 issue. In conclusion, imbalanced
work
 and laziness of people cause lack of physical factor in terms of problems. So government
should implemented
Suggestion
should implement
the strict
Suggestion
stricter
 policies about
work
 hours and
workload
.
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