In the age of globalization and modernization, couples, in most parts of the world, opt for jobs to meet their financial needs.
Although
it brings handsome income for the family, critics believe that spending more Linking Words
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at work place in comparison to their children is resulting in an increase in social problems in youngsters. Use synonyms
This
statement is agreed and it will be shown through examples that children raised in nuclear families are more empathetic and perform well academically.
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, those children who get proper attention from their parents are found to be more empathetic and caring. To illustrate, my grandfather, who was an accountant, despite being in a hectic job, would contribute in daily chores with my grandmother, whenever he arrived home. Linking Words
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also
imparted the values of contribution and Linking Words
emphathy
to their children. understanding and entering into another's feelings
empathy
Also
, statistics from Social Science Institute of United Kingdom have shown that children getting due care in their childhood from parents are likely to be more sympathetic and caring in Linking Words
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, it clearly shows the strong relationship between parents’ Linking Words
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with children and their personality development.
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Secondly
, Children who get ample attention from their parents are likely to perform well in their academic Linking Words
carriers
. the particular occupation for which you are trained
careers
For instance
, since the Linking Words
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four years, I have been in teaching students. I have observed that students who live with single parents owing to Linking Words
work place
requirements do not perform very well in their class exams in comparison to those living with parents in their area of residency. So, what is the main factor behind that?. I a place where work is done
workplace
beleive
it is appropriate attention from their parents. From accept as true; take to be true
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this
it can be logically deducted that due Linking Words
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from parents is essential for academic success of an individual.
To conclude, it can be said that children who do not get enough Use synonyms
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from their parents due to their work requirements have the Use synonyms
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social issues as teenagers. It Suggestion
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, hoped that in future government promulgates a relax policy for a good work-life balance for couples.Linking Words