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Think about your country over the past five years, what it is like now, and how it might change in the next five years. Here are some topics: •lifestyle and standard of living • the economy • the government • relations with other countries

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In our Nepal, several problems are indicated there, in past decades. Most people's had faced different problems like basically transportation, technology, education, communication, healthcare etc. These all features are available in Nepal now. In my point of view, learning and education will become more accessible for all because it will take place in the field and the use of technology will be most noteworthy everywhere in upcoming years.
First
 of all, Lifestyle refers to the way we live including our attitudes, style and possessions. A person, who is doing his/her works as they are interested in, with their own. While s
tandard
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the standard
of living denotes the person's level of wealth, comfort, success, materials, goods and necessities available to a certain socioeconomic class. The e
conomy
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economic
economical
condition in my country, is really poor and weak due to improper management by the government. The government of our country talks really good things i
nfront
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in front
of all Nations. But in actual or practically their words d
oes not work
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do not work
here yet. In conclusion, Nepal is really u
ndevelopment
in many systems as compared to others countries and These all problems s
hould be maintain
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should maintain
earlier to compare with others country.

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