some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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Learning a new
language
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will become
benificial
promoting or enhancing well-being
beneficial
to people who want to travel outside their countries of
who
objective case of "who" ("who" is also often used in the objective)
whom
want to have job experiences in an abroad. Some might agree that learning another
language
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will have more advantages even in your own
country
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. In my opinion, I strongly agree to learn foreign languages for some reasons.
Firstly
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, learning a foreign
language
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can provide many benefits when they are travelling around the world.
For instance
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, if you know foreign languages, you will able to communicate with foreigners. Knowing many
differernt
unlike in nature or quality or form or degree
different
languages will give you not only information about their
countries but
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countries, but
also
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impression from local people.
Secondly
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, if you are trying to get a new job which can offer you more salary and opportunities in another
country
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, you
also
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need to be expert in their
language
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.
For example
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, if you want to work in Japan, you will have to know Japanese
language
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very well while you are
competting
compete for something; engage in a contest; measure oneself against others
competing
completing
computing
with local Japanese people.
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but not least, if people can speak different languages, they will get more chances in their own
country
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.
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In
my opinion, if I know many languages, I will able to communicate with foreigners who are working or travelling in my
country
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and I can learn
many
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much
knowledge from them.Nowadays, English becomes a world-wide
language
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.If someone who doesn't learn English, they will face many
diffiiculities
an effort that is inconvenient
difficulties
in their education and social life.
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In
conclusion, learning new foreign languages can give many benefits to us.
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we need to give plenty of time to learn these languages, it is
wothy
worthy of being treated in a particular way
worth
worthy
to learn for many advantages.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • multilingual
  • linguistic proficiency
  • globalized world
  • cross-cultural communication
  • immersive experience
  • adaptability
  • cultural exchange
  • interpersonal skills
  • employment prospects
  • empathy
  • intellectual development
  • overcome language barriers
  • global market
  • resourceful
  • life-changing
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