The food travels thousands of miles from farm to consumer. Some people think it would be better to our environment and economy if people only ate only locally produced food. What extent do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Technology
has made a significant
impact
on interpersonal
interaction
and the
impact
is both positive and negative. I feel the negative
impact
technology
has on human
interaction
and relationship is way too higher than positive
impact
. The positive
impact
of
technology
on relationships can be that it provides a platform to reconnect with old long lost friends while the negative
impact
c
an be
Accept comma addition
can, be
it affects the quality of c
urrent relationship
Suggestion
the current relationship
by decreasing the time family and relatives get to spend with each other in their home or hometown.I feel
this
situation can be solved through each and every individual’s self awareness and self control. Today, thanks to the smart phone and cheap mobile network social media is easily accessible to everybody anytime
.I
Accept space
.
t helps us in connecting with our long lost friends and even can help us arrange batch get t
ogethers.
in contact with each other or in proximity
together
My mother’s college batch participation in their get together increased considerably after she made a w
atsapp
group of her classmates. Though the
technology
increases the quantity of human
interaction
it has significantly reduced quality. Its detrimental
impact
on q
uality
Suggestion
the quality
of human
interaction
could be s
ee
Suggestion
seen
in the family and
also
in society. Being glued to the
technology
for interacting with long lost friends and relationships, current relationships and interactions gets adversely affected. It is not a rare thing in my home that everyone is in their own virtual world during our family gathering I feel
this
is high time to amend the scenario.The crisis can be solved through self control and determination wherein every individual has to set a time limit to their daily
technology
use and adhere to I feel colleges , Universities, NGO's and voluntary organisations can
also
help our citizens a healthy use of
technology
by promoting observation of no internet hours, no phone hours, no phone areas and so on
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