Some people feel that entertainers ( e.g. film stars, pop musicians or sports stars) are paid too much money. Do you agree or disagree? Which other types of job should be highly paid?
The
job
of movies stars
, musicians or sports stars are the dream Suggestion
movies, stars
movie stars
movie movie stars
job
of majority of people especialy
teenagers. to a distinctly greater extent or degree than is common
especially
However
, I entirely agree that these kind of job
should be paid too much money compered
to other types of jobs. Analysing the phenomenon of examine and note the similarities or differences of
compared
higly
paid of celebrities and said what kind of jobs deserve to be well-paid.
Celebrities like models, sports stars and to a high degree or extent; favorably or with much respect
highly
misicians
should be paid well due to their short career. someone who plays a musical instrument (as a profession)
musicians
missions
For example
, the career of football players are finished
in early age. Between 30 to 35 years-old Suggestion
is finished
in
average. Suggestion
on
Samilary
to models. Despite of their Suggestion
Similarly
successefull
career, having succeeded or being marked by a favorable outcome
successful
most of entertainers
have been struggling to find Suggestion
most entertainers
job
when they become older. Suggestion
jobs
That is
why celebrities should be paid highly
to insure their Suggestion
be highly paid
life
in Suggestion
lives
future
by making project. Take the example of football Suggestion
the future
playes
in Tunisia. They run coffee shop.
On participate in games or sport
plays
played
players
other hand
, there are other occupations are very important in our Suggestion
the other hand
life
but they are neglelcted
. disregarded
neglected
For instance
, the field of medecine
. I think doctors and nurses deserve to have higher income. If we take the example of doctors' the branches of medical science that deal with nonsurgical techniques
medicine
medicines
job
, sometimes they work 24 hours per day at stretch
. It is clear that their Suggestion
a stretch
job
is the most noble job
in the world because they save human life
. Their role is vital in our life
, that is
why government
should give them more attention.
To conclude, entertainers, Suggestion
the government
dorctors
or what a licensed medical practitioner
doctors
directors
doctor
ever is
the kind of Suggestion
has ever been
job
must be well-paid. Because an income is the only inssurance
of human freedom from doubt; belief in yourself and your abilities
assurance
ignorance
endurance
life
. And I think it
the it is
it's
responsability
of the government to cater well income to its citizens.the social force that binds you to the courses of action demanded by that force
responsibility
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