Out of a country health budget, a large proportion should be diverted from treatment to spending on health education and preventive measures. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Prevention

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of illness is more superior than cure,

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forward to delight diseases is too expensive, If inhabitance invests in a defensive

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method, it

would be more excellent, I believe that protect patients

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are

more effective and

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capable of being reduced

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the financial department

that

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the government

held the responsibility of it and the preventive measure it strengthened the body power and shape,

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prevention

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has its limits.

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there are too many methods for protecting our bodies, as a reason, any alive body is not immortal. The

government

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pays a huge amount of money

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health but

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health, but

if people have enough knowledge of how to avoid the type of disease safely it will be an adequate method for decreasing the expenditure.

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, China in 1994 the

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was

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losing

too much money by flue but they found an impressive way to overcome by in the winter inhabitance must wear heavy clothes.

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Therefore, prevention

prevention

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takes a vital role in decreasing the expenses.

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, people can follow a healthy routine daily and it's suitable for all ages that make the human body feels energetic.

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, Egypt in 1997 suffered the proportion of the blood passes through veins was too low so the minister of health made advertisements about how to tackle it by doing sports

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as running.

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, we can easily keep away from an illness

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but not least, to avoid the sickness has its boundaries and there is infection come from nature like the sun that affects badly on the skin especially in the summer. To keep it far, Egypt in recent days the temperature is very high in the summer it has been hurting for three months of the season our skin by several waves.

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cure

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is essential in some events.

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, I think that

prevention

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is significant it is brightly appeared in decreasing the expenditure of

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and

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measure,

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,

prevention

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does not work alone without the cure there is disease comes from nature..