Cashless transactions are order of the day. most of the people prefer using plastic money rather than cash. Do you think this trend will be useful for all action of the society. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
There is no iota of doubt that, many individuals prefer to utilise express
cards
, debit
Correct word choice
and debit
cards
for daily transactions
instead
of paper notes, coin
currency. Correct word choice
or coin
This
phenomenon is offering multifarious benefits to People
However
, sometimes a couple of problems emerge due to
some. The following paragraphs would
shed light on Wrong verb form
will
Pros
and cons of cashless Correct article usage
the Pros
transactions
.
To commence with the first notion that, the
plastic money is easy and convenient to use for purchasing Correct article usage
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the
goods from shopping malls and online. Correct article usage
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Additionally
, the
debit Correct article usage
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cards
and credit cards
have a
terms and conditions for using Correct the article-noun agreement
apply
it
. Correct pronoun usage
them
Like
as: masses can enjoy discounts on shopping Change preposition
For
while
pay
the amount of money in terms of credit Change the verb form
paying
cards
. In addition
to
, there is Change preposition
apply
fear
of robbery whenever a person has Correct article usage
a fear
a
paper money at their place. Remove the article
apply
Where as
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As
,
the Remove the comma
apply
cards
provide better safety as well as
security due to
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apply
sometime
our card Replace the word
sometimes
is misplace
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is misplaced
people
can be
suddenly Verb problem
apply
complaint
to Replace the word
complain
bank
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the bank
a bank
for
block their debit or credit card.
On the flip side of Change preposition
to
a
coin, there are some nasty consequences as well because in many places Correct article usage
the
this
type of transactions
cannot take place. Fix the agreement mistake
transaction
Firstly
, the small shopkeepers and vegetable vendors did not have a swipe machine for payments. Secondly
, in some countryside Fix the agreement mistake
areas
area
sellers did not accept Add a comma
area,
cards
because they are
not well educated. So, the proper knowledge is required for using the express Wrong verb form
were
cards
everyone cannot know about the use of A.T.M
Machine and swipe machine. Correct article usage
the A.T.M
Last
but not the
least, some problems Correct article usage
apply
people
face daily like as
fraud cases on net banking Change preposition
apply
transactions
.
In conclusion, I personally believe that this
trend will not useful
for all sections of the Community Add a missing verb
be useful
Although
, many folks are not aware about
Change the preposition
of
to
use Rephrase
how to
the
electronic Correct article usage
apply
transactions
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apply
However
, the
efforts should be made by Correct article usage
apply
government
to minimise the robbery and fraud cases. So, Add an article
the government
people
can be enjoying
their life.Wrong verb form
enjoy
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