In many countries, children are becoming overweight and unhealthy. Some people think that the government should have the responsibility. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There is a dramatic increase in the number of children have got the

obsesity

more than average fatness

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, especially in some developed countries, where a massive amount of unhealthy food is consumed on a daily basis. Many people suppose that the

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should do something to improve

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issue. From my

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a way of regarding situations or topics etc.

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, I completely disagree with

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view and believe that the

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as the only one who is responsible for combating the childhood

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crisis. It is undeniable to say that the

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a major role to ensure the well-being of children.

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means that when it comes to health-

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interact in a certain way

treating

threatening

diseases, as the

chilhood

the time of person's life when they are a child

childhood

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, the

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should be the one to

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realize

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a threat, introduce and put solutions into practice.

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, apart from encouraging regular exercise and healthy diets, I doubt that the

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has any

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role to play.

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, I would argue that parents have more duty to combat

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in children. The

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reason to be given is that an obese child is often malnourished mainly because they could not receive enough nutrients from their food. Once parents have a poor choice of diet for their kids, a nutritional balance is probably seriously affected.

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fact suggests that parents have a direct impact on improving their children’s health by choosing and maintaining the healthy eating habit which reduces sugar and fat.

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, the lack of physical activity is a topped reason to make children gain weight unhealthily. In fact, nowadays, most youngsters are in

favor

promote over another

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of the sedentary lifestyle and detest

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doing

physical exercises.

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means that the amount of calories from food they consume is much higher than

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the ones

they generate, which causes the

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. In

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situation, parents are the only ones who can encourage or even force their children to do more exercises to protect their bodies from some illnesses. In conclusion, while some people suppose that the

government

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should take responsibility to curb the

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epidemic, I strongly believe that parents have a greater effect on improving their children’s health mainly because they can observe their kids directly.