I am Regan Dooley and I have an active travel insurance with your company. I am writing in connection with an item that I lost during my holiday to Austin, USA.

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I am Regan Dooley and I have an active travel insurance with your company. I am writing in connection with an

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that I lost during my holiday in Austin, USA. The

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is a brand new travel bag and I purchased it for $600 in Houston, USA.

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, the bag consists of my used clothes and an identity card of mine. When I boarded the train from the Austin railway station, I misplaced the luggage somewhere there. As soon as I noticed that

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bag went missing, I filed a complaint with the local police station.

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, they provided me with an FIR number for insurance claim. Please find attached a copy of the FIR claim application and the invoice of the lost

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. As, I am entitled to get a 90% refund of the missing

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, I request you to transfer it to my bank account and the bank account details are mentioned on the application form. If you need any additional information, please do not hesitate to contact me. Thank you Yours faithfully, Reagan Dooley.

Tue Feb 11 2020

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

179 words

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I am Regan Dooley and I have an active travel insurance with your company. I am writing in connection with an item that I lost during my holiday to Austin, USA.

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