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I am Regan Dooley and I have an active travel insurance with your company. I am writing in connection with an item that I lost during my holiday to Austin, USA.

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I am Regan Dooley and I have an active travel insurance with your company. I am writing in connection with an
item
 that I lost during my holiday in Austin, USA. The
lost
persist for a specified period of time
last
item
 is a brand new travel bag and I purchased it for $600 in Houston, USA.
Moreover
, the bag consists of my used clothes and an identity card of mine. When I boarded the train from the Austin railway station, I misplaced the luggage somewhere there. As soon as I noticed that
this
 bag went missing, I filed a complaint with the local police station.
Further
, they provided me with an FIR number for insurance claim. Please find attached a copy of the FIR claim application and the invoice of the lost
item
. As, I am entitled to get a 90% refund of the missing
item
, I request you to transfer it to my bank account and the bank account details are mentioned on the application form. If you need any additional information, please do not hesitate to contact me. Thank you Yours faithfully, Reagan Dooley.

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