Nowadays plastic money replacements such as credit and debit cards are extremely popular even more than banknotes and coins.

electronic
Suggestion
Electronic
transactions are gradually replacing the traditional
bank
Suggestion
banking
system and
use
of banknotes is being
convert
Suggestion
converted
into credit
card
or debit cards.
This
transformation is some
time
positive or sometime negative effect on our life.
To begin
with, we talk about the advantages of plastic
money
. There is no denying that electronic
transaction
or
payment
by credit or debit
card
is more convenient than banknotes or cheques because we
use
mostly online banking for
transaction
or we easy pay by
card
from home by online
payment
system. Electronic
transaction
or
use
cards are globally accepted by people because its save our
time
or easy from anywhere.
Secondly
, credit
oe
introduces an alternative
or
debit cards
are easily fit
Suggestion
easily fit
in our wallet. Its means we have no need to carry
huge sum
Suggestion
a huge sum
of
money
with us. In
previous era
Suggestion
previous eras
a previous era
the previous era
, banks are busy full day with
people but
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people, but
nowadays only some people go there for only some issues. Small businessman
work
Suggestion
works
properly in their office because now they do not waste
time
going
in
Suggestion
into
bank
Suggestion
the bank
a bank
in withdraw or deposit
money
.
Thirdly
, It
has became
Suggestion
has become
easy to
shopping
Suggestion
shop
with visa or master
card
from anywhere in the world. When we
use
card
or electronic transactions than we have no risk of theft or lost our
money
.
Finally
, electronic or
card
payment
is
more fast
Suggestion
faster
or easy than bank notes or cheques because it
take
Suggestion
takes
less
time
to process the
transaction
. Plastic
money
make
Suggestion
makes
life
more easy
Suggestion
easier
because now we pay bills or
payment
from home at any places within
few mintues
Suggestion
a few minutes
few minutes
. As
a
Suggestion
an
every
cion
a flat metal piece (usually a disc) used as money
coin
has two sides, it any things has pros than it
aslo
in addition
also
crons
an ugly evil-looking old woman
crones
croons
, electronic
transaction
or
card
payment
is not accepted by small vendors,
Moreover
, some
time
payment
is rejected or some
tecnical
of or relating to technique or proficiency in a practical skill
technical
issues when we
paymentanything
. According to some people, online
payment
increases shopping habits of people, because previous
time
they are busy they are not
time
Suggestion
timed
to go outside for shopping but now
it
it is
it's
easy shopping online and pay by
card
.
some
Suggestion
Some
data hackers hack our data or misuse
card
or theft our important data by online banking.
Furthermore
, high value
tranaction
the act of transacting within or between groups (as carrying on commercial activities)
transaction
are not possible or when we
use
cardsometime
Suggestion
card sometime
we pay additional charges on online shopping. To conclude, plastic
money
replacement
ts
denotes a person or thing
this
postive
characterized by or displaying affirmation or acceptance or certainty etc.
positive
change
into
Suggestion
in
the
society but
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society, but
its
it is
it's
neccessary
absolutely essential
necessary
for us to
use
careful online system or cards.
Thus adventages
Accept comma addition
Thus, advantages
Thus advantages
of
outwieght
than disadvantages because
its
it is
it's
our fault when we
use
anything without any knowledge
.
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.

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