23. Should education and health care be free of charge and funded by governments or should it be responsible of the people for these service. Discuss with the example.

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and
health
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care
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are two elements for local citizens in societies and the charge to assess them varies in terms of local governments. Some people advocate that governments should be responsible for funding them completely; while, others insist that it is people's personal responsibility. The essay will discuss both views and presents my personal opinion as well.
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with, universal he
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health care
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education
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coverage will enhance the sensation of happiness of local residents for which they are more  willing to contribute themselves to their nations. Nobody will suffer from illnesses  due to financial issues and  no student will drop out of school due to poverty.
As a result
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, nations will become more powerful and stronger due to their he
althy a
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health
nd well-educated citizens.
For example
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, Bu
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a landlocked principality in the Himalayas to the northeast of India
Bhutan
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s one of small Asian countries with free
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to
health
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care
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and
education
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for Buhtaneses since its beginning. The country is one of co
untries w
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the countries
ith highest National Happiness Index and strongest military force. Free
access
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to
health
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care
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and
education
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provide ha
rmonious environment f
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a harmonious environment
or residents' growth, development and even thrive as well.
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, no charge of
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care
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and
education
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will
also
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bring some drawbacks to the nations as well. The
first
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one is that it might cause to abuse the services if residents and professionals who are in charge of
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alth
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the health care system
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system do not follow strict guidelines.
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, universal services will lead to burdens for governments' budgets. In addiction, the efficiency of
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alth system a
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the health system
health systems
nd motivation of
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might be diminished.
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, parents and children might take
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ucation opportunity a
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the educational opportunity
educational opportunity
an educational opportunity
s a grand and do not strike for them due to easy
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. In Canada, universal he
althcare s
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health care
ystem leads to longest waiting time for seeing specialists or operating.  In conclusion, free he
althcare a
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health care
nd
education
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coverage will bring either benefits and drawbacks listed above. It definitely makes ordinary residents happy and less stressful by eliminating fi
nancial burden o
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the financial burden
f medical bills and
education
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tuition.
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, in order to maintain these two services's qualities, clients should have
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to them properly or they will collapses and local citizens will suffer.
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